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| p.1 #2 · First Photo Post, Madison Ave Candid |
Welcome to FM.
Where I think the image is strong:
- Good exposure
- Subtle but decent color
- Good focus on the subject
- Interesting hat
Where I think it is weak:
- With the exception of the coats, the scene doesn't seem to be that cold (no vapor, no snow, no rain, no icicles, etc.)
- Subject's sideways glance/expression gives me more of a "Is he going to mug me?" vibe than "it's freaking cold out here!" vibe.
- The composition here, with the subject so close to the edge of the frame almost makes me want to focus more on the blurry couple than on the subject. The subject's glance in that direction doesn't help.
Those are just my initial impressions and I'm just one guy. Don't let my comments dissuade you from posting in the assignment. That is what the assignment is for - to get you to practice, to shoot for an objective, to hone your skills. That's why Fred calls it an assignment and not a contest.