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that I would love to hear your opinions and critics.








Thanks a lot,

Jaime



Jan 25, 2013 at 07:41 PM
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I like the processing but the expression does not make her look happy.


Jan 25, 2013 at 07:51 PM
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I agree with BauerPower. She seems annoyed or even slightly angry.


Jan 25, 2013 at 08:05 PM
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Thanks,

Yes, that´s her natural way of being, watching at ... and there was no way to change it neither during the whole wedding nor during the engagement shooting, maybe my fault for not being able to tweak that.

Jaime



Jan 25, 2013 at 08:13 PM
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It would be a softer expression if she just relaxed the tension in her brow a bit, it's a bit of an 'are we done?' expression.



Jan 25, 2013 at 08:58 PM
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TTLKurtis wrote:
It would be a softer expression if she just relaxed the tension in her brow a bit, it's a bit of an 'are we done?' expression.



Yeah, that´s exactly what was happenning !!! though I should have controlled it better.

This is what she gave me in the engagement.







Just a bit softer.

Jaime



Jan 25, 2013 at 09:08 PM
 

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Wow.... what did you do to her? She seems annoyed at you.
For some reason, the flower seems to be in focus. Maybe it's my crappy monitor at work.

For this sort of pose... uhm is the shadow at the back acceptable?



Jan 25, 2013 at 09:09 PM
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Ghost wrote:
Wow.... what did you do to her? She seems annoyed at you.
For some reason, the flower seems to be in focus. Maybe it's my crappy monitor at work.

For this sort of pose... uhm is the shadow at the back acceptable?



Nothing !!! I swear to god

About the shadow, I did that on purpose though I may have gone a little too far !!! in such a ligth and shadow on her face not putting shadow on the wall didnt work for me.



Jan 25, 2013 at 09:15 PM
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You should try to get her arm off the body.


Jan 25, 2013 at 09:32 PM
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Inku Yo wrote:
You should try to get her arm off the body.


+1

creating some separation between the arm and the body does great wonders for making women look smaller.



Jan 25, 2013 at 09:47 PM
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For some reason she seems to be looking downwards, were you shoot upwards?


Jan 25, 2013 at 10:52 PM





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