p.1 #2 · My 1st wedding in 2013 - Debbie & Rodrick
in the 1st pic the "writing style" looks like the Hoffer one.
The logo is too much intusive and is always in a different position in the frame, that imho, is not the bes solution.
p.1 #3 · My 1st wedding in 2013 - Debbie & Rodrick
Overall, these looks pretty good... they must have been happy. A few observations:
8. Looks bizarre... it looks like she's hugging her clone. Other than a dark shoulder on the left, you can't really see the groom.
20. ... and all the other colour ceremony shots: the yellow is too strong, especially in the hair.
29. It feels like your OCF is too strong, it's not terribly flattering on the the mom.
32. Ditto, except it's not as bad here but I think she will notice all the little hairs around her lips, nose and chin.
p.1 #4 · My 1st wedding in 2013 - Debbie & Rodrick
Nice work! Thanks for sharing. Not sure if you're looking for C&C, but here are mine:
* love everything about that ring shot.
* the church WB seems a little off to me.. maybe too much green?
* in general i feel like the set is a bit over-processed.. some of the dodging/burning seems a bit too much, i.e. in the dress. but that might just be my taste.
* this set would be a lot stronger if you cut down half of the images.. I'm guilty of the same thing too but I think a 15-20 image set would be a lot stronger in this case.
