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p.1 #7 · Oak Creek in monochrome | |
Dave wrote: Sasha, I like what you have done to take what would otherwise be considered annoying clutter and made it the foreground plane of the image, for which the creek becomes just the backdrop. I'm not so sure it completely works in this case, perhaps because it is still relatively sparse, but I'd like the see the idea explored more. I also get the monochrome reference, although that isn't what struck me first. But I still like this attempt to explore a non-traditional approach to landscape composition.
Dave, thank you for the detailed comment. That's exactly a kind of critique I am looking for. I realize that the composition had a big risk of looking clattered but could not pass the sycamore fruits - think of them as my trademark
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