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p.1 #1 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Anyhow- a monochromatic scene I liked.



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Jan 15, 2013 at 02:48 AM
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p.1 #2 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Hi Charlie,

My thoughts, the water works in the colour shot OK, but as a black strip across the bottom in the first shot, maybe not.

Cheers Ray



Jan 15, 2013 at 04:46 AM
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p.1 #3 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Charlie, for me all of the sparkles and dots distract from the composition.
regards, tom



Jan 15, 2013 at 02:53 PM
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p.1 #4 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


The 'sparkles and dots' don't bother me at all; they're what the shot is all about IMO; it's the still water at the bottom that is...je ne sais quoi. That make any sense? I like your shot, Charlie.

Kenny



Jan 15, 2013 at 03:05 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Thanks Ray, Tom and Kenny.
I pretty much thought the same things as you guys when I stood there looking at all that.... stuff.
My exact words were "What the hell is this."
So I took a picture of it .
Charlie



Jan 15, 2013 at 09:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Charlie, I like all the sparklies and highlights here and would also consider cropping the still water from the bottom. Looks almost like ice breakup on a river with a lot of decayingvegetation on bottom causing the bubbles/er sparklies.
Douglas



Jan 15, 2013 at 09:58 PM
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p.1 #7 · Yellowstone- Abstract? Or just vague?


Cropping out the lower water creates a better balance of the horizontal lines in the image, and gives a clearer sense of what the image is about. My only other observation is feel there is something needed to balance left and right, I keep wanting to see something else on the right. Of course there may have been nothing in the scene.


Jan 16, 2013 at 07:22 AM





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