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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Did this lovely couple at Prospect Park in Brooklyn, NY. What do you guys think? C+C







Jan 14, 2013 at 05:41 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Powerful use of the silhouette.


Jan 14, 2013 at 12:27 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Clone out the trashcan and sign in the BG, if it's available add a little more space below the couple

Might want to see how it looks in black and white, it might add a bit more mood to it.

Nice work

Phil



Jan 14, 2013 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


^ Vy. Nice shot. agree with above. Get rid of the trash can and whittle the sign off the lamp post. looks like another green sign on another pole on the left. A few minutes of PS will clean this up and turn it into something special.


Jan 14, 2013 at 01:10 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


andyjh wrote:
^ Vy. Nice shot. agree with above. Get rid of the trash can and whittle the sign off the lamp post. looks like another green sign on another pole on the left. A few minutes of PS will clean this up and turn it into something special.

Agree. I was wondering which sign he was referring to. Both were bothering me.

Love the picture.



Jan 14, 2013 at 04:59 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Clone out that trash can and the green sign. Make that background a simple park with no distracting items in it.

Or try a B&W version?



Jan 14, 2013 at 07:38 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Here is the pic with signs and trash can cloned out and i added a B&W












Jan 14, 2013 at 08:19 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Beautiful work, the BG cleanup definitely helped

Maybe try cropping a touch off the right side so the arch is more centered?



Jan 14, 2013 at 10:15 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Beautiful work, the BG cleanup definitely helped Maybe try cropping a touch off the right side so the arch is more centered?

Yeah..now that you mention it. It does need a little cropping on the right side. Thanks everyone for the help. Later I will post more from this set



Jan 15, 2013 at 04:42 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


I think it's gorgeous. One more tiny nit...I'd liquify her backside a little bit...


Jan 15, 2013 at 04:47 AM
 



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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


nice silhouette


Jan 15, 2013 at 12:34 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Thanks for the comments everyone. This pic sure turned out to be special and the couple loved it


Jan 16, 2013 at 09:35 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Prefer Black and White. Much more dramatic.


Jan 16, 2013 at 09:37 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


the black and white one is really nice, it has a great concept behind it and so I love it

Edited on Jan 19, 2013 at 07:10 AM · View previous versions



Jan 18, 2013 at 12:11 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Sweet.


Jan 18, 2013 at 03:56 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


very nice.



Jan 18, 2013 at 04:06 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Thanks everyone!! Black and white does make it more dramatic


Jan 19, 2013 at 04:17 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Lovely shot! Looks awesome in black and white.
My only comment is the light pole coming out of his head. To me, that was more distracting than the garbage can (although looks much better with it removed!)
Great work!



Jan 20, 2013 at 03:44 AM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Maternity Shot from Saturday C+C


Lovely shot! Looks awesome in black and white.
My only comment is the light pole coming out of his head. To me, that was more distracting than the garbage can (although looks much better with it removed!)
Great work!


Your absolutely right. I will take it out and thanks for the comment!



Jan 21, 2013 at 05:27 PM





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