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Great series, you definitely captured nice detail in the eye area. Based on these, that seems to have been one of your primary areas of interest.
Other than what others and OP have mentioned, I'd also maybe PP some of those hair flyaways (just the major ones - some of them look very easy to fix). I'd also work a different pose in #4, as I think the pose makes her arm look huge. Maybe that's just me, though
In the last photo, the shadow on the right eye distracts me a bit, especially since the shadow of her eyelashes is so crisp.
Also, the ring is distracting to me in #2 and #3, kinda pulls me away from the eyes.
I had written a paragraph about the makeup, but figured that was too much to get into
I bet the subject loves these photos. Love those eyes!
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