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dhp_sf Online • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · Victorya (NFSW?) Did a shoot yesterday with a model. She wanted a couple different looks. 1. This one is supposed to looks more like a product shot. I could imagine ad copy put into the negative space (which is why i left it) 2. Straight forward head shot. No explanation needed for the next three. 3. 4. 5. C&C welcome Jan 10, 2013 at 07:02 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #2 · Victorya (NFSW?) Very nice. Like the edginess in the shots. Last one could use a little work on her upper leg. Jan 11, 2013 at 12:27 AM

DaveOls Online • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #3 · Victorya (NFSW?) Those strange eyebrows definitely detract from the shot. Jan 11, 2013 at 03:47 PM

John Caldwell Online • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · Victorya (NFSW?) 1st class all around. John Caldwell Jan 11, 2013 at 05:33 PM

dhp_sf Online • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · Victorya (NFSW?) bbourizk wrote: Very nice. Like the edginess in the shots. Last one could use a little work on her upper leg. Thanks! I'll take a look at that. DaveOls wrote: Those strange eyebrows definitely detract from the shot. They are stylized to go with a retro look. However I agree--it was something that was planned by the makeup artist and model, so not really something I was in control of. John Caldwell wrote: 1st class all around. John Caldwell Thanks! Jan 11, 2013 at 07:15 PM

gheller Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #6 · Victorya (NFSW?) DaveOls wrote: Those strange eyebrows definitely detract from the shot. agree. you should inform the model (and MUA) that feedback you have received form working pros suggests that the eyebrows are a train wreck (say it nicer than that). greg Jan 13, 2013 at 06:53 PM

brewercm Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #7 · Victorya (NFSW?) gheller wrote: DaveOls wrote: Those strange eyebrows definitely detract from the shot. agree. you should inform the model (and MUA) that feedback you have received form working pros suggests that the eyebrows are a train wreck (say it nicer than that). greg +1 When I first saw it I thought, why didn't they knock those caterpillars off her forehead. Almost looks like they had just shaved off her unibrow right before the shoot. Not sure what the mua was trying to get across with that look but very distracting from an otherwisenice set of images. Good work on your part. Jan 13, 2013 at 08:21 PM

Sid Ceaser Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #8 · Victorya (NFSW?) I gotta chime in about the #2 headshot. I would say for a really strong head shot, you need to be shooting tighter and including more to camera right of her head. Her chest is distracting, especially that part under her arm where I can see her hair folicles. I shouldn't be seeing that in a head shot. Keep it tighter, include less of her chest. And, man, she's really caking on the makeup, isn't she?? Cheers, Sid Jan 14, 2013 at 01:35 AM

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