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Grantland
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hi,

i was hired by a mom to make 9 simple posters with one cutout for a 7th grade girls b-ball team.

do the lights work or what? i used these lights for a musical poster once and it was awesome. not too sure about basketball?

i need to clean the poster up a bit. just looking for overall thoughts.

thanks,

grant











Jan 09, 2013 at 06:42 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · poster feedback


Only one thing for sure about this poster.... Courtney will LOVE IT!


Jan 09, 2013 at 07:24 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · poster feedback


Maybe tone down the outer glow a bit. I'm not a fan of outer glow to begin with, other than black, but my feeling with this is it's too overpowering. Makes the player look nuclear.


Jan 09, 2013 at 07:27 PM
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I think the lights are too overpowering and distracting for this poster. I think the glow is too much also, it looks like she is radioactive. I have no experience with a poster like this and these comments are just my 2 cents, so I hope some of the experts can give more constructive critique and suggestions.

Bill



Jan 09, 2013 at 07:31 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · poster feedback


Don't mind the lights. Agree on toning down the outer glow. Two other minor nits. 1) match the color of the yellow in Wayzata to the yellow in her jersey 2) either lose the school logo above the Y in her name or make it much more prominent.

I know those weren't things you asked about -- but just my $0.02 worth.

Rick



Jan 09, 2013 at 07:35 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · poster feedback


Nice start Grant.
I agree to downplay the lights a little. They are distracting.

bb



Jan 09, 2013 at 07:52 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · poster feedback


thank you for all the comments. you guys are great!




Jan 09, 2013 at 09:20 PM
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the blue lights and the warm skin tone dont mesh well at all id mess around with the white balance or change the light colors


Jan 11, 2013 at 08:40 AM





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