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She needed to turn her head just a bit.


Sunpak 933 upper camera right w/homemade beauty dish and T-shirt diffuser panel
Sunpak 383 upper camera left w/43" shoot through umbrella.



Jan 06, 2013 at 11:35 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Th wife and I


You look a bit stiff too and you have a wall hanging coming out of your head giving you antlers. Next time, if she wants her right hand on your shoulder, have her turn it so we dont have her fingers coming toward the camera, but I would get rid of it altogether and just have both hands loosely clasped on your close shoulder and then turn your body slightly toward her. The reds match nicely.



Jan 06, 2013 at 11:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Th wife and I


Agree about the antlers - nice rack! Also agree that your wife looks very relaxed. You, not so much. Very nice exposure on both of you.


Jan 07, 2013 at 12:18 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Th wife and I


It's hard to find a good background in a house. Worth giving it lots of effort, however.


Jan 07, 2013 at 06:04 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Th wife and I





What antlers?



Jan 07, 2013 at 10:47 AM
 



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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Th wife and I


That's one solution. And you did a good job.

Bet you'd rather get it right in camera than mess with PS to fix it next time.

The "fixing" around the hair is the hardest to get right. Wisps of hair get swept away and don't look quite right.



Jan 07, 2013 at 11:31 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Th wife and I


Howdy,

Quick Comments:

Looking at this image I am drawn to your wife's nice expression...as it gives me a very good impression of her.




Jan 07, 2013 at 05:05 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Th wife and I


Thanks Steady!


Jan 07, 2013 at 06:45 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Th wife and I


what a nice smile your wife has, i am instantly drawn to her smile.


Jan 07, 2013 at 08:27 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Th wife and I


Lighting is too harsh and contrasty for a portrait in my view. Also, the little "flash" highlights in the eyes are blocking out the pupils. Agree with the antler problem, and the fixed version is now unbalanced.


Jan 08, 2013 at 02:53 AM





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