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magyarangol
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Very much an impromptu shoot with my wife over the Christmas period.

Constructive critism always very welcome.

Many thanks.

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8078/8314374231_1447cd7cdb_c.jpg

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8212/8314376245_ce9fd5fe9e_c.jpg



Jan 03, 2013 at 01:30 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I like the second shot. Cropped out head in first one is not appealing to my eye. Good lighting and PP.

Best,

Arthur



Jan 03, 2013 at 01:55 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Achilles2010 wrote:
I like the second shot. Cropped out head in first one is not appealing to my eye. Good lighting and PP.


+1



Jan 03, 2013 at 02:04 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


donrisi wrote:
+1


+2 and with the first one, the body twist does not work. The second one captures her beauty quite nicely.



Jan 03, 2013 at 02:42 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I agree. Like #2.

#2 could use a better crop too. Cutting along an arm isn't best.



Jan 03, 2013 at 04:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I like the coloring in 1, but the pic in 2 best

Greg



Jan 03, 2013 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I like the second on but I feel the chain over power the image some.


Jan 04, 2013 at 04:35 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Thank you for the feedback.


Jan 04, 2013 at 09:16 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


ltlouis96 wrote:
I like the second on but I feel the chain over power the image some.


+1, totally agree, nice image but the necklace just grabs your attention. Beautiful wife by the way and if the images don't turn out I am quite certain you still have a nice smile on your face, lucky guy!

Dave



Jan 04, 2013 at 09:43 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Achilles2010 wrote:
I like the second shot. Cropped out head in first one is not appealing to my eye. Good lighting and PP.

Best,

Arthur



+1



Jan 05, 2013 at 01:04 AM
 



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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Achilles2010 wrote:
I like the second shot. Cropped out head in first one is not appealing to my eye. Good lighting and PP.

Best,

Arthur



+1



Jan 05, 2013 at 01:04 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I actually like the first shot. There's a voyeuristic effect to it, almost not posed. Awesome work.


Jan 05, 2013 at 02:17 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Outstanding!


Jan 05, 2013 at 08:54 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


One word. Amazing.


Jan 05, 2013 at 09:41 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


She is natural that is what I like. No fake parts...
Nice photo and pp



Jan 05, 2013 at 01:54 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


The second one is excellent.


Jan 05, 2013 at 09:11 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Spencer, she is stunning. And whatever "rules" may have been broken in crop or positioning, to my eye both shots work beautifully.

With the tight crop and strong diagonals, 1 becomes a soft, sensual graphic (I have to remember this one). 2 is just a really lovely portrait.

Nice work.



Jan 06, 2013 at 09:46 AM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Though #2 is better I also like #1. I do like the twist. It gives it some motion of passion to me.


Jan 06, 2013 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


I've gotta go with the first one as the better of the two. While it's not a "portrait" in the conventional sense, the lines, curves, textures and juxtaposition of light and dark with just the right contrast was masterful. The contrast in the second one is too harsh to suit my taste. Different strokes, right?

You have a wonderful model with whom to work. Congratulations to you both for making some excellent art here.




Jan 06, 2013 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · The Wife - Boudoir Shoot (NSFW?)


Loving #2, especially the conversion.


Jan 06, 2013 at 09:44 PM
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