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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · The Cross-ing


Looking for some word play for a title ... wip/concept/draft

C&C welcome as always.

Cross
Crossing
Safety
Safely
Warnings
Danger
Hazard
Adherence
Protection
Train Station / Departure / Arrival
Destination / Travel
etc.







Jan 01, 2013 at 02:05 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · The Cross-ing


Beautiful.

"Religious crossroad".




Jan 01, 2013 at 02:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · The Cross-ing


Thanks Kaden.


Jan 01, 2013 at 06:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · The Cross-ing


I suspect a slightly lower point of view would have been more grabbing, but I quite like the neutral b & W scale.


Jan 01, 2013 at 07:37 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · The Cross-ing


Thanks Karen.

Lower POV

I tried to align the town name between the crossing lights and the cross lights to "connect" the two. What would be your intended nexus / objective emphasis by using a lower POV?



Jan 01, 2013 at 07:50 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · The Cross-ing


I'm suspecting that a lower POV would put the crossed sign elements above the roof line and separate the dark signal collar from the dark underside of the roof whilst moving the station name below the signal.







Jan 01, 2013 at 08:04 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · The Cross-ing


Gotcha ...

Does this help?







Jan 01, 2013 at 09:40 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · The Cross-ing


Yes, although a bit less blur on the signal edge would help. <ducking>


Jan 02, 2013 at 06:09 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · The Cross-ing


Thanks ... no worries @ <ducking> ... mask needed refinement. It can be a good thing to be in the land of the "micro-nits".









Jan 02, 2013 at 06:38 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · The Cross-ing


Double crossed


Jan 02, 2013 at 01:10 PM





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