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Dneufarth
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Jessi


C&C always greatly appreciated.

Thanks, Derek







Dec 28, 2012 at 12:31 AM
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Pretty model, nice pose, nice lighting, but color seems just a little too warm.

Greg



Dec 28, 2012 at 12:43 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Jessi


gregSC wrote:
Pretty model, nice pose, nice lighting, but color seems just a little too warm.

Greg


I agree with Greg! everything looks good but it's a bit too orange for me.



Dec 28, 2012 at 12:49 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Jessi


gregSC wrote:
Pretty model, nice pose, nice lighting, but color seems just a little too warm.

Greg


Is this better?








Dec 28, 2012 at 12:51 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Jessi


The skin has the plastic over-smoothed look.


Dec 28, 2012 at 01:52 AM
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I'm no pro -- so take this with the grain of salt is deserves. It's a nice image, good pose, and warm expression.

What method did you use to soften skin? Perhaps backing down on the opacity of that layer a tad would add tot his image. I'm also drawn to a line above her left eyebrow.

The color of the 2nd is much better than the 1st.

J



Dec 28, 2012 at 01:55 AM
 



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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Jessi


version 2 much better. she is stunning.


Dec 28, 2012 at 06:52 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Jessi


Hi-
Any whichway -
I like it -
Paul



Dec 28, 2012 at 01:21 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Jessi


Love it!

Best,

Arthur



Dec 28, 2012 at 02:40 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Jessi


As mentioned above, nicely lit, good expression, good composition, and I appreciate not seeing a stark white background. One small nit, you might consider doing a slightly tighter crop right side, to hide her right scapula.


Dec 28, 2012 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Jessi


I love this, only wish I was currently capable doing this level of work. I have one question though: what is the vertical line on her neck?


Dec 28, 2012 at 05:47 PM
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Nice pose/composition.

Lots of good comments already, so I have nothing new to add.



Dec 28, 2012 at 09:03 PM





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