I think it's interesting. But if you're looking for advice, exactly what are you looking for? Did you have a vision of this shot? If so, did you hit it? If not, why not? What's missing?
This is a really small picture - 214 X 320 pixels. Try posting your next shots at 800 pixels on the long side - That would be 4 times larger. That's a good size for viewing and critiquing.
I'm with some of the others - wondering about your vision or intentions for this.