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I tend to first look at photographs from a simple point of view.
I look at this and immediately like it. A pretty girl looking into a shop window at Christmas time. Nice turning of the face, graceful body position, etc. I presume she was with you, and between the both of you, she seems to be a good model.
Then I look more critically at images.
True, there are some problems here- but imo nothing major.
I did some basic editing (be aware- I'm no expert), and thought the results helped some.
Here's my edit:
PM me if you want to prolong this dialogue (or have me pull my edit).