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p.1 #1 · Theresa


To use this image in color, I had to change the hue of some background elements.
Bob
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Dec 22, 2012 at 10:53 AM
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I love your shots, but in this one she seems a little too far to the left of the frame. It almost makes my attention move from her to the objects on the right, as if they're deliberately in the shot. Perhaps a square crop would work better this time. Just a thought.


Dec 22, 2012 at 05:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · Theresa


I agree with Tony, the color of the individuals on the right keep drawing my eye.
Douglas



Dec 22, 2012 at 05:11 PM
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p.1 #4 · Theresa


Perhaps B&W and a slight crop on the right?

Just a thought.

Pat



Dec 22, 2012 at 10:42 PM
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p.1 #5 · Theresa


Thank you, Tony, Douglas and Patrick. How about this...







Dec 23, 2012 at 12:51 AM
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p.1 #6 · Theresa


IMO .... Perfect!

Pat



Dec 23, 2012 at 02:55 AM
 



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p.1 #7 · Theresa


Much better Bob!
Douglas



Dec 23, 2012 at 03:12 AM
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p.1 #8 · Theresa


Yes, I love the new version too!


Dec 23, 2012 at 02:37 PM
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p.1 #9 · Theresa


Thank you.

There is a recent string on this forum about negative comments, that provides both light and heat. I have been blessed with very helpful constructive criticism on this forum. Please keep it up! :-)



Dec 23, 2012 at 03:51 PM
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p.1 #10 · Theresa


Hi,

I'm no expert, but I love looking at each contributors art and learning vicariously through the string. IMHO, both of your pics look awesome.

Do you mind posting what kind of camera and lens you're using? (I'm guessing a 24-70 2.8?)

Oh and I love the earrings. They are cool.



Dec 24, 2012 at 01:48 AM
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p.1 #11 · Theresa


Thank you, Beetle! I was using the Nikon D90. The good news is that I used the NIKKOR 85mm f1.4 (@f2.8). The bad news is that it went back to LensRental.com, where it lives. I was hoping that Santa might bring one, but not this year.


Dec 24, 2012 at 02:00 AM





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