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 p.1 #5 · J/D e-session C+C please | |
#6 and #10 are the only ones I'd keep from this set, if they were mine.
I really like #6.
Issues:
#2 - badly out of focus, even at low-res.
#3 - the bell is really overpowering with this composition. The bride/groom blocks seem like an afterthought.
#4 - you chopped the guy's hair. Maybe just personal preference, but chopping hair in that type of comp really bugs me.
#5,#7 & #8 - really awkward, forced posing. They don't look natural at all.
#9 - I like this one, but the stars are a real distraction, and the comp isn't too strong to emphasize them. If it were my image, I'd have cloned the stars out, zoomed in a bit and place them closer to a convergence point on either the rule of thirds or the golden mean. With no other compositional elements in the frame, that would be my approach to maximize impact...
That's my $0.02. Hope you find it useful!
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