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Archive 2012 · Two of my girls
  
 
iJeffG
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p.1 #1 · Two of my girls


Took my girls to the park for their summer pictures...here are a couple I particularly liked. C&C desired.

Claire


Kate



Dec 21, 2012 at 03:11 AM
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p.1 #2 · Two of my girls


Hi,

I like expressive portraits.

These both appeal to me because of the expressions.

Good job.



Dec 21, 2012 at 04:27 AM
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p.1 #3 · Two of my girls


Thanks. Some days they like to cooperate.


Dec 22, 2012 at 03:56 AM
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p.1 #4 · Two of my girls


The first is fantastic. The second is weak due to the lack of eye contact and the fact that her eyes lead us out of the picture.


Dec 22, 2012 at 04:14 AM
 



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p.1 #5 · Two of my girls


Yeah, I see your point, Andre. If not head-on like Claire's, instead of the head turned toward camera, and the eyes left...her head should be left, and eyes toward the camera.


Dec 22, 2012 at 09:48 PM
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p.1 #6 · Two of my girls


Nice job on both of these.

One thing to notice/plan for next time - is the large shoulder. Because it is nearer to the lens, it appears quite large. Poses or compositions where you minimize this effect (only showing part of the shoulder or finding a different camera perspective) are options for you.



Dec 23, 2012 at 09:51 AM
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p.1 #7 · Two of my girls


Jim, am I correct in assuming both pictures could benefit from your comments? I'll have to look around for some poses where the shoulders aren't as "forward" in the shot.\

Thanks!



Dec 24, 2012 at 02:15 AM
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p.1 #8 · Two of my girls


iJeffG wrote:
Jim, am I correct in assuming both pictures could benefit from your comments? I'll have to look around for some poses where the shoulders aren't as "forward" in the shot.\

Thanks!

I had nothing more to add for #2 that wasn't already mentioned (the eyes).

Looking forward to more of your shots.



Dec 24, 2012 at 12:16 PM





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