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bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · Laura Your thoughts on this photo please. Thanks for looking Dec 15, 2012 at 01:37 PM

markperez Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #2 · Laura her right hand position is odd, personally I would like a bit more light on the right side of her face also seems like a bright streak of light down her nose and a bright spot under her left eye. Her hair is nicely lit and so is the couch and dress Dec 15, 2012 at 02:14 PM

ChiShutter Offline • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #3 · Laura I'm fine with the hand, personally. I think the whole shot is pretty damn good, except the hotspots on her face -- a bit too strong with the light IMO. I struggle with this myself, depending on the modifier. Dec 15, 2012 at 05:29 PM

carnac Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · Laura Really nice. A little hot on the left cheek. I would clone out the bright return near the heal her left shoe. The rest of the skin tone, pose, hair, and lighting is excellent. Jim Dec 16, 2012 at 08:13 AM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · Laura Thanks for taking the time to look and comment. I agree with the hotspot on her face. Regarding the hand she kept leaning on it and gave her big arms, so we went with this... I have a couple of other frames where the hand is more forward and actually looks better, but her facial expression in this one is better. Thanks again Bud Dec 16, 2012 at 11:02 AM

PhotoDes Offline • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #6 · Laura I like the concept and the way you've executed it, but the image is too contrasty for me. It just doesn't seem to flatter the model. Des Dec 16, 2012 at 07:50 PM

fstop212 Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #7 · Laura I think this is a nice shot. Agree on the hot spot on her face, but that's an easy fix. Dec 26, 2012 at 04:48 PM

andyjh Offline • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #8 · Laura Along with the above, looks like the couch is floating in space. Dec 26, 2012 at 05:47 PM

David-D Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #9 · Laura Agree with all the comments above but I still like the composition over all. Thank you for sharing Dec 26, 2012 at 09:13 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · Laura Thanks for the feedback. I liked the shot turned out but can see it needs some work... will shoot it again hopefully soon. Regards Bud Dec 28, 2012 at 12:37 PM

Matt Leitholt Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #11 · Laura Overall I like it, but the face could use some work, looks a little blotchy. Dec 28, 2012 at 07:15 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #12 · Laura Matt Leitholt wrote: Overall I like it, but the face could use some work, looks a little blotchy. Thanks for taking a look mate. The make up she was wearing wasn't helping either. Have edited again and looks better. Dec 30, 2012 at 11:02 PM

MDJAK Offline • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #13 · Laura Agree with above but I like it. Jan 03, 2013 at 02:27 AM

anthonysemone Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #14 · Laura my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo. Jan 06, 2013 at 11:25 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #15 · Laura MDJAK wrote: Agree with above but I like it. Thanks for taking the time to look mate Jan 08, 2013 at 02:14 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #16 · Laura anthonysemone wrote: my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo. Hey Anthony, out of the shoes she brought with her these suited the dress and the idea I was after better. Regards Bud Jan 08, 2013 at 02:16 PM

bbourizk Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #17 · Laura A couple more shots from that shoot. Jan 08, 2013 at 02:17 PM

jfinite Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #18 · Laura I like the last two much better than the first, there's just so much going on in 1 that it doesn't seem cohesive. Jan 08, 2013 at 03:14 PM

sozypozy Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #19 · Laura I love the pictures. The only thing I don't like are the light spots in the first one, they don't go too well. Edited on Jan 09, 2013 at 01:22 AM · View previous versions Jan 08, 2013 at 08:27 PM

anthonysemone Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #20 · Laura #2, by far the best of the series, IMHO - and the shoes work Jan 08, 2013 at 09:27 PM

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