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Shootmegul
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · family portrait at park


Sharing few from a recent mini session shot in natural light at sunset









Thank You



Dec 06, 2012 at 06:04 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · family portrait at park


Hi,

Quick Comments: I like images 1 and 4.

In image 1 I would prefer to see more space in front of them, not behind them. There is an object behind him that gets my eye attention, looks like a trashcan or bin or something like that. ?

Don't care for the low contrast face/eyes on man in image 2.

Don't care for the composition (head chop of man) in image 3.

Hope these comments help you.



Dec 06, 2012 at 06:55 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · family portrait at park


Great work...I think #1 is the most flattering photograph of her, the way her jawline is presented with that tilt of her neck. For some reason, the shadows on her face in #2 don't seem to be nearly as flattering, just a personal opinion...others may completely disagree


Dec 06, 2012 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · family portrait at park


thanks
image 2. there is a problem that i tried but couldn't fix and steady hand you picked it up the man. somehow I had a sort of a flair/low contrast thingy. and if i play with contrast there I was messing up the lower half of face




Dec 06, 2012 at 08:03 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · family portrait at park


On the color shots, a little shot of fill flash may have helped bring the subjects standout from the bright background. They seem to be a bit shadowed to me. Nice job, none the less.


Dec 07, 2012 at 12:55 PM





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