Home · Register · Search · Software · Hosting · Software · Join Upload & Sell

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
Username   Password

  Pre-order new Rokinon 16mm f/2.0 ED AS UMC lens
  Pre-order new Sigma 18-35mm f/1.8 DC HSM lens
  Bower 35mm f/1.4 price dropped to $379
  
FM Forums | People Photography | Join Upload & Sell  
end
  

family portrait at park
  
 
Shootmegul
Offline

Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · family portrait at park


Sharing few from a recent mini session shot in natural light at sunset

This image is copyrighted by the owner

This image is copyrighted by the owner

This image is copyrighted by the owner

This image is copyrighted by the owner

Thank You



Dec 06, 2012 at 06:04 PM
Steady Hand
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #2 · family portrait at park


Hi,

Quick Comments: I like images 1 and 4.

In image 1 I would prefer to see more space in front of them, not behind them. There is an object behind him that gets my eye attention, looks like a trashcan or bin or something like that. ?

Don't care for the low contrast face/eyes on man in image 2.

Don't care for the composition (head chop of man) in image 3.

Hope these comments help you.



Dec 06, 2012 at 06:55 PM
brianclary
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · family portrait at park


Great work...I think #1 is the most flattering photograph of her, the way her jawline is presented with that tilt of her neck. For some reason, the shadows on her face in #2 don't seem to be nearly as flattering, just a personal opinion...others may completely disagree


Dec 06, 2012 at 07:13 PM
Shootmegul
Offline

Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #4 · family portrait at park


thanks
image 2. there is a problem that i tried but couldn't fix and steady hand you picked it up the man. somehow I had a sort of a flair/low contrast thingy. and if i play with contrast there I was messing up the lower half of face




Dec 06, 2012 at 08:03 PM
Vince Muehe
Offline

Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #5 · family portrait at park


On the color shots, a little shot of fill flash may have helped bring the subjects standout from the bright background. They seem to be a bit shadowed to me. Nice job, none the less.


Dec 07, 2012 at 12:55 PM
end




FM Forums | People Photography | Join Upload & Sell

end
    
 

You are not logged in. Login or Register

Username   Password    Lost your password?