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Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

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p.1 #1 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

As always C&C is greatly appreciated, but especially regarding PP in this case.

Thanks, Derek

Dec 03, 2012 at 02:23 AM

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p.1 #2 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

The catchlights directly over her pupils in the first shot looks a bit strange to me.

Dec 03, 2012 at 02:34 AM

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p.1 #3 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

179 views and 1 comment? I will chine in because I like the direction you are going.

#1 - The eyes are overly whitened and saturated. Tone it back a little bit? Her lips seem to be misshapen by the post. The skin is a little over processed for my taste.
#2 - Same as above.

Please take my comments in the spirit they are typed, as constructive feedback. She is a very pretty model with a wonderful shape to her face. Of the 2 I prefer #2.
I look forward to seeing future work and edits.
Cheers

Dec 03, 2012 at 04:07 AM

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p.1 #4 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

Thanks for the feedback gentlemen. Tobin no worries, I asked for a critique of PP and you gave it to me. Here are the images toned down a bit.

Dec 03, 2012 at 05:18 AM

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p.1 #5 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

I think that there are no comments because the woman is so stunning with such unusually colored eyes. I really like the pictures, but I would not have cut off the top of her head. Other than that, they are great.

Dec 03, 2012 at 12:16 PM

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p.1 #6 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

can't disagree with Dave's assessment.

Dec 03, 2012 at 12:25 PM

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p.1 #7 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

v.nice work

Dec 03, 2012 at 04:20 PM

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p.1 #8 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

When looking at these, it's hard to get beyond the lipstick. It extends beyond the corners of her mouth, and also looks like it goes under her bottom lip, although that could be caused by the camera angle.

Dec 03, 2012 at 10:34 PM

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p.1 #9 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

she is beautiful but I dont see any connection to the camera. I like number two, would like it better if she was looking at camera. Dont like the lips in 1, too processed

Dec 03, 2012 at 11:18 PM

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p.1 #10 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

Thanks to all for the comments.

-Derek

Dec 05, 2012 at 11:06 PM

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p.1 #11 · Dani, part 2, maybe NSFW

Something slightly off with #1, maybe the pose itself, or the crop. #2 works nicely for me. Thanks.

Dec 11, 2012 at 02:15 PM

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