179 views and 1 comment? I will chine in because I like the direction you are going.
#1 - The eyes are overly whitened and saturated. Tone it back a little bit? Her lips seem to be misshapen by the post. The skin is a little over processed for my taste.
#2 - Same as above.
Please take my comments in the spirit they are typed, as constructive feedback. She is a very pretty model with a wonderful shape to her face. Of the 2 I prefer #2.
I look forward to seeing future work and edits.
I think that there are no comments because the woman is so stunning with such unusually colored eyes. I really like the pictures, but I would not have cut off the top of her head. Other than that, they are great.
When looking at these, it's hard to get beyond the lipstick. It extends beyond the corners of her mouth, and also looks like it goes under her bottom lip, although that could be caused by the camera angle.