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p.1 #1 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


My wife was uncommonly patient while I played a new light modifier... c/c always welcome.

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Nov 30, 2012 at 01:33 AM
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p.1 #2 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


A very attractive and sexy lady.Nicely done.


Nov 30, 2012 at 03:37 AM
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p.1 #3 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


light is nice, but I wish there would have been some eye contact...


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p.1 #4 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


Josh Evilsizor wrote:
light is nice, but I wish there would have been some eye contact...


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Nov 30, 2012 at 05:58 AM
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p.1 #5 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


much better...

looking at these again, it looks like your highlights are a little hot on her face



Nov 30, 2012 at 06:24 AM
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p.1 #6 · Maya | Los Angeles, CA


Good expressions from your model. Tell her she did a good job.

The light in some of these is a bit too strong. Some parts of the blouse looks blown in #1 and her face in #2. Like in wedding pics, there's the white clothing vs facial features that need different amounts of light to expose properly.

I realize you were testing out new lighting and you were not in a roomy studio. However, some of these are pretty tightly composed. #3, for example has the hand cut on one side and the shoulder on the other. A step back - if there was room - would help.



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