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p.1 #1 · Down town at night....


Thanks for looking







Nov 28, 2012 at 11:17 PM
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p.1 #2 · Down town at night....


really like the concept of here. However, in my opinion the headlights attracts too much attention away from your main subject.

I'd love to see a closer crop with just the individual and that billboard as well.



Nov 29, 2012 at 12:25 AM
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p.1 #3 · Down town at night....


Thanks for the feedback. Will put your suggestions into place and see if I like them.

Iron sharpens iron...



Nov 29, 2012 at 01:14 AM
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p.1 #4 · Down town at night....


I see a real story here -- lonely traveler, the approaching transit bus, the bus stop self-advert advises using the bus; contrasted with the rose above his head and the happy seasonal lights. I might tame the headlights a bit, but enhance the roof lights of the bus so we really know it's a bus. I also see a square crop, keeping the center just above the rose and above the watermark. A radical crop would lose the seasonal lights and the travel advice, which would change the story. Sparks.


Nov 29, 2012 at 01:34 AM
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p.1 #5 · Down town at night....


Thanks


Nov 29, 2012 at 02:13 AM





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