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I'll go against the trend and say I like the first shot as-is. No need to over-analyze it, as some of you may be doing. The title is "Red", and my initial thoughts on this shot were that the subject and focus are the lovely red colors of the girl's hair. I don't need to see her eyes, nose, or anything else in focus. Works for me, as it seems to for the OP, too.