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jaylee73
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p.1 #1 · Fall Family Shoot


Here are some pics I took a couple weeks ago for some friends. Any suggestions?





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Nov 28, 2012 at 03:10 AM
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p.1 #2 · Fall Family Shoot


Try to be careful when cropping and cutting off body parts. Hands in #1, feet in #2 and elbows in #3. I feel like the crop is too tight in #2 and #4 as well. Good start just try to be conscious of that in the future!


Nov 28, 2012 at 05:30 AM
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p.1 #3 · Fall Family Shoot


Agree with tbini87. Composing/cropping is what to work on.

And in #2, do the shot with them facing you, not away. Faces are usually more interesting that their rear ends. Or do both shots.



Nov 28, 2012 at 06:41 AM
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p.1 #4 · Fall Family Shoot


Jim Rickards wrote:
Agree with tbini87. Composing/cropping is what to work on.

And in #2, do the shot with them facing you, not away. Faces are usually more interesting that their rear ends. Or do both shots.


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Nov 28, 2012 at 01:48 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · Fall Family Shoot


Thanks for the pointers. I seem to have a bad habit of cropping too tight. My focus has been on all the other stuff (exposure, focus, WB) rather than composition.
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Nov 28, 2012 at 02:39 PM
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p.1 #6 · Fall Family Shoot


Nice job. I try to remember to never crop on a part of the body that bends (elbow, knee, waist). I wouldn't mind number 2 if there was more of a leading line/path/ foreground in the shot leading your eye to them. Maybe having the little girl facing the camera in that shot swinging from her parents hands.

Love the tones you captured. What set-up were you using?

Iron sharpens iron...



Nov 28, 2012 at 05:23 PM
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p.1 #7 · Fall Family Shoot


Exposure looks great, but crops are way too tight. Leave some wiggle room


Nov 28, 2012 at 05:49 PM





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