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Rick:
I like the basic design, I like the simplicity and I like the emphasis on a strong photo. I'd like to see just a bit more work with the fonts (play with the layer styles to give these more depth and/or set them apart better from their respective backgrounds. I don't thik the number needs the glow around it (though a stroke or drop shadow might be fine). I'm not sure what I think about the "Class of 2013 Senior Season" emblem. Right now, it looks sort of like a stamp. Either it's important enough to warrant more emphasis, or it isn't necessary, but as it stands, it's kind of in-between. Any chance you could incorporate this into the blue band running along the left side, along with the name?, or under the position text?
Don't get me wrong--these look good. But now you're to the point where the tweaking can go on for a long time, any of which is only like to bring you a few percentage points closer to perfect.
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