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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Old Technology In Cuba


Have a concept for a shot for the monthly contest. Looking for some feedback. I don't usually do selective color, and can't choose between the two. Or any C&C for either version would help as well.



Steven Szabo Photography 2012


Black and White





Steven Szabo Photography 2012


Selective




Nov 27, 2012 at 06:48 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Old Technology In Cuba


The first image for me.


Nov 27, 2012 at 07:17 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Old Technology In Cuba


thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated


Nov 27, 2012 at 07:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Old Technology In Cuba


Same here @ B&W


Nov 27, 2012 at 07:28 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Old Technology In Cuba


Oregon Gal wrote:
The first image for me.


+1



Nov 27, 2012 at 07:46 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Old Technology In Cuba


Definitely black and white.


Nov 27, 2012 at 07:54 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Old Technology In Cuba


thanks again to all for taking the time to comment. Going with the B&W for sure obviously...lol. Any C&C on the B&W? want to have the best image possible for my submission.


Nov 27, 2012 at 07:56 PM
 

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Old Technology In Cuba


Top left palm leaf ... and maybe some of the wires. I think having only one (or none) wire running to the house would be a bit more suggestive of "old" instead of today's plethora of electricity running all over the place.


Nov 27, 2012 at 08:52 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Old Technology In Cuba


Beautiful shot, I prefer the B&W myself, but would like to see the original in full colour... but I assume you didn't upload that as you don't intend on showing it for the competition.

Selective colouring on shots is hard to perfect, and even harder to show to your average audience, given the audience on here though, I think you will get some intelligent feedback.



Nov 27, 2012 at 09:30 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Old Technology In Cuba


Posted a cleaned up version with the power lines and the palm leaf removed on recommendation, and then posted the color version as Lunchb0x8 requested





Cleaned Up









Nov 27, 2012 at 10:03 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Old Technology In Cuba


I can't get the sky to look quite right in the cleaned up version. I'm not so great at that kind of thing


Old School by Steven Szabo, on Flickr



Nov 27, 2012 at 10:11 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Old Technology In Cuba


I wasn't sure that the lines needed to be removed. However, seeing it now with just the single one does help.


Nov 27, 2012 at 10:34 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Old Technology In Cuba


My 56 was a hard top, loved that car. I prefer the color but who would have guessed.


Nov 27, 2012 at 10:44 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Old Technology In Cuba


I like it, the colour shot is beautiful, nice work.


Nov 29, 2012 at 12:23 AM





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