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| p.1 #4 · On a train - B&W, C&C |
1. Image looks a bit soft for my eyes.
2. Pose is very "static" and flat. Consider giving her a bit more structure to add some interest and allow her to engage the camera a bit more. Use the doorway, hand rail to bring some structure to the shot.
3. The crop is awkward here cut off at the crotch and then a weird hand crop also. For my money crop wider or tighter here.
The shot has a lot of potential and the model looks like she would be pretty good to work worth.