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guess I will keep my images to a (closer) set of professionals.... where comments are real.






Edited on Nov 26, 2012 at 05:03 AM · View previous versions



Nov 24, 2012 at 01:52 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Fashion shot


Diggin' it except for the one that highlights her abdomen.


Nov 24, 2012 at 04:42 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Fashion shot


Good eye Kent, took me a while to spot it. I think I would prefer it without any of the flare effects.

An other wise very good image.



Nov 24, 2012 at 03:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Fashion shot


Iíve always found it difficult to place a modelís hands. Her left sleeve looks almost too long and limbless with no hand showing. And her right hand looks purposeless to the stance with the thumb cut off. The lighting is well done save for the grey background bubbles, which are either flair or miscued clone stamps to emulate flair. Just my two cents worth.



Nov 24, 2012 at 05:01 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Fashion shot


I changed the image, what do you think of this one instead ?


Nov 26, 2012 at 01:14 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Fashion shot


I'd also suggest retouching some of the stray wisps of hair.


Nov 26, 2012 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Fashion shot


With regard to the replaced image ...

What is the point / objective that you are trying to achieve?

I ask this because of the lighting on her face / angle relative to her nose / far eye ... as well as the pose / look on her face. That and the way that the garment lays / is lit.

Neither seem to be very flattering ... which might be okay for some "unconventional" pose / lighting to go for a "different look" ... BUT ... for a FASHION shot, the garment is showing rather badly and wrinkles, gaps, tugs, pulls and where the highlights/shadows fall.

A fashion shot shouldn't show the garment so poorly, imo.




Nov 26, 2012 at 04:17 AM





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