|ESC in KC
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I won't pile on with comments about the focus and lack of processing - but I will add that your crops are not good in 1, 2, 3, 4, and 7. Limbs chopped at or near joints - try and avoid that. Why clip the end of her foot? If you have part of a foot or part of a hand, you usually are better off showing the whole thing.
Honest opinion for you here - you are not ready to charge money for photography yet.
You need to practice a lot more to understand how to recognize poor lighting conditions and adapt appropriately (use open shade, screens, reflectors, off-cam flash), how to get light into the eyes, how to crop, how to focus, how to post process, and how to white balance for skin tones.