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As far as a reflection being bad, I feel differently than some others above. I think a reflection can be a very clever and interesting part of an image if done with some care and depending upon the subject, composition, and what is shown in the reflection.
Also, having the lightest part of an image away from a face is not necessarily a bad thing either, depending upon what YOU want the viewer to see or notice first.
What would I do differently?
A few things, but here is the simplest to correct:
See the reflection. Notice the rays. Are those the spokes of an umbrella? If so, try to avoid showing them in the final image.
I hope these comments help you.