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p.1 #1 · College grad shot


Starting to separate the wheat from the chaff....This one caught my eye. We expounded on the suitcase, leaving for a new journey theme a little more in a few other shots....Like this but not sure it conveys the message we were after

Thanks for looking....

comments welcome....





Canon 5D w/ Sigma 85 1.4




Nov 20, 2012 at 06:08 PM
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p.1 #2 · College grad shot


Michaelparris wrote:
Starting to separate the wheat from the chaff....This one caught my eye. We expounded on the suitcase, leaving for a new journey theme a little more in a few other shots....Like this but not sure it conveys the message we were after

comments welcome....


do college grads use that type of suitcase?



Nov 20, 2012 at 08:18 PM
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p.1 #3 · College grad shot


Two things seem to be 'off' in this one.

Like CW100 pointed out, that's likely grandpa's suitcase, not her own.

The other is the crop that runs through the bicycle. Why cut through the handlebars? It looks careless.



Nov 20, 2012 at 08:49 PM
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p.1 #4 · College grad shot


I can actually see her using the suitcase in a retro/ironic sort of way. However, I think the photo would be improved with a bit of a different crop, not through the handlebars but rather on the other side of the apex of the tire and sharing some more of the suitcase.


Nov 20, 2012 at 09:09 PM
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p.1 #5 · College grad shot


CW100 wrote:
do college grads use that type of suitcase?

Yes....it was hers



Nov 20, 2012 at 11:28 PM





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