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 p.1 #5 · NCAA Women Soccer championship - Stanford hosts (and crushes) Santa Clara and Denver | |
Hi Denis, here is what I'm seeing:
1 - think I know what you were striving for, in the end, it appears as two distinct facets with one unfortunately OOF, sadly it's the "oh well try again" frame we all seem to capture on occasion.
2 - like it, cropped a bit too tight top and bottom. Would try in PP to open up the shadows a bit. Tough lighting conditions for sure.
3 - good one, would try it in portrait if there is more room top to bottom than shown
4 - don't ya love how goal posts never seem to be straight?  Pet peeve here, the watermark has discolored the face of #24 and distracts the eye. In general posting watermarked versions on FM while asking for C&C seems a bit counter intuitive. JMO
5 - what does the prior frame show? Ball closer to the action? As is, the ball too far away and partially cut off, action is over, not a keeper IMO
6 - like the capture, does the frame prior have the ball closer?
7 - EXCELLENT !
8 - going portrait with a crop will make it a much stronger frame, too much negative space
9 - VERY GOOD !
10 - like the composition, cropping issue though with body parts missing, horizon could use a tweak
Best of the lot is #7 and a close second is #9. It's always a treat to find frames like these two when editing a day's shoot. Good job 
Regards,
Matt
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