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| p.1 #5 · anti war protest images |
Andre Labonte wrote:
Based on the title and the composition of these images, I assume you are going after a journalistic approach, so I am restricting my comments how well these images portray the events and tell the story.
#1 does not tell the story at all ... my first thought was: "What is that gerk doing in the middle of the street?".
#2 -- kind of dark ... missed the hands, saw #3 and went back to #2 and saw the hands.
#3 -- blurry
#4 -- Ah, now I know what you are after, I can see all the symbolism and the context of...Show more →
So the last picture should be first. That's easy to fix.
It's just like other photo documentaries. Show the broad view - maybe a couple of shots - then show the closer shots, after the audience "gets it".