I see your photo post has had many views and no comments from viewers.
I know that can be disappointing and often discourages people from posting/participating in a forum like this.
So, I will post a comment or two and maybe that will get others to contribute their views too.
As with anything where a subjective view (opinion) is shared, there can be many views of the same issue or subject.
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I am posting a comment in your post because NO ONE else took the time to thank you for adding photos for us to view. I believe in "The Golden Rule" (treat others as you would like to be treated). It is "good karma" too.
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Good job on the photos.
The "helmet visor up" photo reminds me of one I posted about 18 months ago of a young boy who is a race car driver.
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What do I think would improve these shots?
I think more lights to define the forms would be nicer, especially on the bike and some top light on the Helmet Visor Up shot.
I think all are perfectly fine, love the duc, and its a flat black bike ^, so controlling light is a little tougher, i understand also great job cloning out the bell logo in 1, needed it. Have room to do any wider shots?
I do wish you got a shot of him on it visor down in a full tuck looking ahead setup like shot 3.
also great job cloning out the bell logo in 1, needed it. Have room to do any wider shots?