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p.1 #2 · Adirondack's Early Summer 2012 | |
Hey Den,
You captured the area nicely. It's certainly great to see a shot with your wife (who is very nice looking), and one with you in it too. In the one with your wife, I guess this was more just capturing her as she walked, but pose her just a bit next time and have her looking to the right if she is on the left hand side of the shot, and if she is on the right hand side of the shot, have her look to the left. Having her look into the shot, rather than out of it, will help keep the viewers attention.
#2 is my favorite shot here, I like the detail in it. #3 just doesn't have the interest that #2 does.
Good work,
Jim
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