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Ian Ivey wrote:
You could probably reserve 2, 3, 4, and 12. The rest are great from a story-telling perspective.
#2 because people looking at the set probably know who it's about, or if not, they won't know much more by seeing the invitation.
#3 is cute and they'll like it, -- oh, hell, maybe keep this one, but my first reaction was it didn't need to be there with that great opening shot of the dress. I see this is about the girl, but it's similar enough to be a toss-up on first glance.
#4 is too similar to #1 composition-wise, and I think weakens the impact of the first shot.
#12 duplicates the data in 15 for most purposes. Expression is the same, he's looking at the same thing.
I'd certainly deliver all of these, but you asked whether we could identify any that didn't need to be in the blog, and these are the ones I could stand to lose. ...Which tells you something -- I could only get rid of three or four out of 69. 
Thanks, mate. I have a feeling she is going to want me to drop #4 along with the one of her chugging the beer (#53), which is part of the reason why both 1 and 4 were in there (she is a teacher of little kids). I was wondering about those first ones, though...they did seem a bit repetitive. As for 12, the main reason I included it was that I thought that many people might miss the groom in number 11 in the bottom right corner, and seeing that image right below it might make them realize. But, yeah...it is way similar to 15 in expression. It get's the axe!
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