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Shane F
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p.1 #1 · Fall family session

Editing through a session from last weekend. Mom was afraid I was not going to get anything useful - the 4 kids were running around and having fun. This is the first of 4 kids that I edited, she stopped for a brief second.

Oct 29, 2012 at 08:23 PM

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p.1 #2 · Fall family session

It's beautiful, what a gorgeous girl : )

Oct 29, 2012 at 08:27 PM

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p.1 #3 · Fall family session

Perfect.
Mothers always say that and are pleasantly surprised when they get great captures

Oct 29, 2012 at 10:29 PM

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p.1 #4 · Fall family session

Looks good Shane. Nice fall colours too.

Try making her larger in the frame with some cropping as an alternate composition.

Oct 30, 2012 at 03:48 AM

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p.1 #5 · Fall family session

Jim Rickards wrote:
Looks good Shane. Nice fall colours too.

Try making her larger in the frame with some cropping as an alternate composition.

+1

Oct 30, 2012 at 06:06 PM

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p.1 #6 · Fall family session

The leaf on her shirt is a little distracting and the branch on her right arm is too, but it is a beautiful image

Oct 31, 2012 at 01:52 PM

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p.1 #7 · Fall family session

Well, thanks for all the comments...here is an alternative crop and edit to loose the leaf.

Oct 31, 2012 at 06:27 PM

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p.1 #8 · Fall family session

Love the redo...great colors...perfect amount of flash (I assume) - hardly noticable

Oct 31, 2012 at 06:32 PM

Jim Rickards
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p.1 #9 · Fall family session

The last shot is exactly what I had in mind. Nice crop.

Nov 01, 2012 at 01:00 AM

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p.1 #10 · Fall family session

So much better!! Looks great!

Nov 01, 2012 at 01:40 PM

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p.1 #11 · Fall family session

Nice

Nov 01, 2012 at 03:32 PM

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p.1 #12 · Fall family session

Love it. Nice capture!!

Nov 01, 2012 at 03:42 PM

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p.1 #13 · Fall family session

Thanks everyone....cloudy day, shooting with a 5DII, 50 mm f/1.4 @ f/2, -1.3 ev in AV mode, ISO 400 and 1/2500th. Using two flashes, camera left is a 430 II in a shoot threw umbrella and a bare bulb 580 camera right (high and back).

Nov 01, 2012 at 07:14 PM

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p.1 #14 · Fall family session

Nice image, I would like to see her the same size as photo #1, but off center to the left a little more.

Nov 01, 2012 at 08:36 PM

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p.1 #15 · Fall family session

wake1923 wrote:
Nice image, I would like to see her the same size as photo #1, but off center to the left a little more.

I don't really have enough area to crop much differently....here is the original, straight out of the camera.

Nov 01, 2012 at 08:47 PM

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p.1 #16 · Fall family session

Lovely photo - but your second crop puts her head to close to the top for my taste.

Do you have any of them 'running around' that came out nice?

Nov 04, 2012 at 09:04 AM

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p.1 #17 · Fall family session

None posed...just sitting on the edge of the dock:

Got them sitting together just having a blast (thats a falling leave over his foot):

Nov 04, 2012 at 09:17 AM

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p.1 #18 · Fall family session

Very nice set....I would leave a little head room in the shot of the little girl, like how you cropped the sides. It might be a touch more pleasing to ones eye if you take some off the bottom of the shot with the little boy. Not sure I like #3 comp seems off. It's good not great...

Nov 04, 2012 at 09:38 AM


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