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testudo123
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p.1 #1 · Fall Portrait of a Toddler - CC Welcome


Here's a picture I took of my friend's daughter. I'm hoping to get some feedback on the picture, including any tips for me to consider going forward using this picture as an example.

Thanks,

--James








Oct 28, 2012 at 08:26 PM
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p.1 #2 · Fall Portrait of a Toddler - CC Welcome


It's a nice shot, especially compositionally. You did a nice job of getting the exposure right even with that bright background. Would've liked to have seen some kind of smile but toddlers are toddlers. Can you bump your colors a bit? I think that would help some. I'm no pro, just know what I like.


Oct 28, 2012 at 09:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · Fall Portrait of a Toddler - CC Welcome


I think you need to add some "pop" to this, it appears to be a little flat. Great composition.
Douglas



Oct 29, 2012 at 12:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · Fall Portrait of a Toddler - CC Welcome


Thanks for the comments. Is this any better? Are there specific changes I should try to make?

Thanks,

--James








Oct 29, 2012 at 03:08 PM





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