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Archive 2012 · More of Abby

Bob Jarman
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Cross post from Photo Critique.

Thoughts & comments appreciated.

Regards,

Bob

Hmm, cat food.

Same to you, buster!

Oct 27, 2012 at 11:27 AM

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the small highlight on top of the first one is distracting, and the artifacts? in the background of the second the same.

I prefer the perspective and lower angle of shooting in the second as opposed to the first

And I prefer the toning of the second

Moreover, the smoothness of the child's skin is juxtaposed with the busyness surrounding

I hope this helps

Joe

Oct 27, 2012 at 12:31 PM

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p.1 #3 · More of Abby

Nice ones, Bob. Just fix the strange artifacts in the BG of #2.
She sure looks like great fun to have around.
Chris

Oct 28, 2012 at 11:38 AM

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p.1 #4 · More of Abby

Joe and Chris,

Thanks for looking and your comments. Yes, I do not know exactly when the BG in #2 came off the tracks but certainly needs cleaning up.

Yes, she and her brother are fun - need to keep an ample supply of meds on hand for the old back tho

Regards,

bob

Oct 28, 2012 at 05:59 PM

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Oct 29, 2012 at 06:54 AM

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p.1 #6 · More of Abby

Bob:
The subject of her attention in the first, her hand could have used a bit more depth of field in my opinion. Love the expression you captured in the second.
Douglas

Oct 29, 2012 at 06:59 AM

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p.1 #7 · More of Abby

Douglas,

Thanks for looking and your comments. Here is a re-work incorporating earlier suggestions.

Bob

Oct 29, 2012 at 08:19 AM

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p.1 #8 · More of Abby

Nice job with the rework, Bob. Works for me.
Chris

Oct 29, 2012 at 01:59 PM

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p.1 #9 · More of Abby

very nice reworked image, ready for a wall spot

Joe

Oct 29, 2012 at 02:31 PM

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p.1 #10 · More of Abby

Chris and Joe,

Thanks for checking back

Bob

Oct 30, 2012 at 07:23 AM

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p.1 #11 · More of Abby

Lovely shots, Bob! I particularly like the repaired version of #2! It's got great character!

All best wishes,

Endre

Oct 31, 2012 at 09:44 PM


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