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 p.1 #7 · Some shots with a recent bride | |
Love the BW in number one, but not a fan of the inverted vignette. Although it almost works on this shot.
2 is spectacular. The lighting and color palette are great.
4 is ok, except it looks like you snapped the shot while she was posing for someone else.
8 is not the glamorous smoking shot you probably wanted. Her pose makes her look like a wizened up old lady lighting her cigarette.
9 is beautiful and flattering, I'm sure she'll love it.
10, not crazy about the pose, and the bluish tint on the dress makes it look cheap. Something about the lace on the bottom,
11 is ok, again not crazy about the pose. I'm not a fan of wide angle shots that are done vertically. I think it'd be better with a longer focal length or stepped back with the wide angle lens to get more in.
Otherwise it's good solid work.
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