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Creativesnaps
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Taken the other day.
Just trying something different.






Oct 24, 2012 at 08:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Peggy


I like the colors but I can't figure out what is going on.


Oct 24, 2012 at 09:11 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Peggy


Cheers. It was just a bit of fun thats all.


Oct 24, 2012 at 09:13 PM
 



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Hi,

I have seen things like this before, and can appreciate you are trying something for fun.

My Quick Comment:

My eye is drawn to the open mouth and open nostrils.

In my opinion, that weakens the image.

I suggest a reshoot with those two things minimized (mouth closed, different POV to the face).

I hope these comments help you.



Oct 24, 2012 at 09:26 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Peggy


Steady Hand wrote:
Hi,

I have seen things like this before, and can appreciate you are trying something for fun.

My Quick Comment:

My eye is drawn to the open mouth and open nostrils.

In my opinion, that weakens the image.

I suggest a reshoot with those two things minimized (mouth closed, different POV to the face).

I hope these comments help you.


Hi steady hand, what i meant with it being a fun shot is that we just wanted to do something different and wacky but as you have said there is need for improvement and shall make sure i put your suggestions in place next time and pay attention to detail.
Your CC is very much appreciated



Oct 25, 2012 at 12:35 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Peggy


I really like this, colors, creativity, and post.


Oct 27, 2012 at 11:02 PM





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