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Maybe a color cast in the first, but I am really enjoying!
The second also has some beautiful pastel palette especially along the water's edge, but the sky has less interest. If you go more pano, losing half the sky (and quite a few dust bunnies along the way) I think the image works better.
Interestingly, I didnt think BW at all because of the pastels, but Kent's rework illustrates the potential and brings some more drama to the sky without pushing it too far.