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mserrano
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p.1 #1 · Documentarish.... C+C


Hi all,

Had a hybrid session with this family (more towards documentary) except for some outside set but unposed pictures.

C+C is appreciated!

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Thanks!

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Oct 23, 2012 at 05:03 PM
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p.1 #2 · Documentarish.... C+C


Some excellent shots in this series. 3 is the overall money shot for me. Superb photo.

Love the set in 24 too. Nice work indeed.




Oct 23, 2012 at 05:20 PM
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p.1 #3 · Documentarish.... C+C


Really nice Miguel. Nice compositions in general and good creativity. I like the hybrid approach, I prefer more documentary work but this is a great mix of both. Favorites include 3, 6-9 (nice relaxed vibe to a portrait session), 20, 24, and 27.
One minor nit would be that it seemed like there were a lot of similar photos of a baby sitting on the dad on the couch. Also the vignetting felt a bit heavy in some.
Dave



Oct 23, 2012 at 05:35 PM
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p.1 #4 · Documentarish.... C+C


I enjoyed these a lot. Thanks for sharing them.

--David



Oct 23, 2012 at 08:13 PM
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p.1 #5 · Documentarish.... C+C


Thanks everyone!

@qwyjibo yeah, need not to have such heavy hand vignetting. Thanks for pointing it out!



Oct 24, 2012 at 02:49 PM
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p.1 #6 · Documentarish.... C+C



Howdy,

First...my standard intro to anyone "new" to me on this forum...
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.

Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. I can only speak for myself and what I do or do not find appealing in the posted photos. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
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Quick Comments:

Many nice photos.

I don't like the "Dad is Headless" or "Dad's head was cut" compositions/framing...

1, 2, 15, 16

My Simple Suggestion: Compose the shot to include the father's face and top of his head.



Oct 24, 2012 at 03:56 PM
mserrano
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p.1 #7 · Documentarish.... C+C


Thank you Steady, will keep in mind.


Oct 24, 2012 at 09:12 PM
 



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p.1 #8 · Documentarish.... C+C


5a !!!!

Thanks

Rgds
Velu



Oct 24, 2012 at 10:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · Documentarish.... C+C


excellent job


Oct 24, 2012 at 11:11 PM
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p.1 #10 · Documentarish.... C+C


good set!


Oct 26, 2012 at 06:48 PM
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p.1 #11 · Documentarish.... C+C


I loved them all! Interesting sun flare (?) in #9! As I looked at #5, I kept wanting the order of the two reversed... the baby looks at Mom, THEN, at the camera. Maybe it is just me. I like the #24 group and I LOVE the last one! Really nice photos!


Oct 29, 2012 at 06:39 AM
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p.1 #12 · Documentarish.... C+C


very nice series... agree that #3 is the money shot... tfs!


Oct 29, 2012 at 06:59 AM
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p.1 #13 · Documentarish.... C+C


Thank you all for the C+C much appreciated !


Oct 30, 2012 at 05:30 PM





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