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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


A recent session with a young family
A few in studio and then a couple of locations.
Any feedback welcome and thanks for looking.

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Oct 23, 2012 at 12:05 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


Hey, nice shooting, got some cool locations and emotions there.
1 - Great idea, but me no likey the cropped feet.
2-4 - Not a big fan of the warmed up WB, too much yellow/red for me.
5 - Dig it
6 - Got some yellow/green contamination from the foliage in their skin tones, correct with Color Balance slider moving from green to red (more), and yellow to blue (less).
7 - Dig dug
8 - Nice, consider brightening just a touch
9-10 - Sweet



Oct 23, 2012 at 06:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


Hey Justin
Thanks for taking the time to have a look and comment on the photos.

Thanks for pointing out the issues in 6 will re-edit that one as i'm confident they will order that as a print.

the processing in 2-4 was just to change things up a bit..only took a few shots in that location as it was a miserable day with rain on and off and awful skies.

Thanks again
Bud



Oct 24, 2012 at 10:54 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


Good compositions setups and expressions. A few exceptions (the feet) but a good set.


Oct 25, 2012 at 06:44 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


3 is awesome. Not a fan of the processing, but the kid kissing his dad and the other kid mushed on mom is just perfect.


Oct 25, 2012 at 11:16 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


Jim Rickards wrote:
Good compositions setups and expressions. A few exceptions (the feet) but a good set.

Thank you Jim for taking the time to have a look.



Oct 25, 2012 at 12:34 PM
 



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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


zalmyb wrote:
3 is awesome. Not a fan of the processing, but the kid kissing his dad and the other kid mushed on mom is just perfect.


thanks zalmy

I had another go at editing 3, Better?






also redid 6
but the hotspot on the boys head is even more noticeable now






Thanks all for looking



Oct 25, 2012 at 12:36 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


1 is great. The edit on 3 is much improved. some very very good stuff here! Honestly, I would get rid of 6. The dappled light doesnt work for me and I dont think you really need it in the set.


Oct 25, 2012 at 04:36 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


benee wrote:
1 is great. The edit on 3 is much improved. some very very good stuff here! Honestly, I would get rid of 6. The dappled light doesnt work for me and I dont think you really need it in the set.


Thanks for taking the time to comment
I have another frame of 6 where the light is better (sun was popping in and out of clouds) but the youngest boy is looking at the ground. If only i was good at swapping heads lol.

Thanks again
Bud




Oct 26, 2012 at 02:30 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


Nice set Bud. Really liking 1 (definitely could use space on the bottom) and 3 (prefer the edit). I would like 10 a lot more if she was separated from the tree to be able to see her silhouette distinctly.


Oct 26, 2012 at 06:53 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


NUMBER 8 IS GREAT


Oct 29, 2012 at 09:39 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Family shoot with the Dyakins


qwyibo, boshek and linlin

Thank you all for taking the time to have a look and comment



Oct 29, 2012 at 12:06 PM





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