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| p.1 #4 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome |
Very interpretive renderings ... not much to critique, as it looks like you have "command & control" over what you are trying to achieve.
My pref might be to lower the gamma / blacks just a touch in the first one, and raise the gamma just a touch in the second one ... but that's only going to be personal pref, rather than a nit, given these are highly stylistic.
If you haven't already, I might revisit to give the most credence to the face at where you want PP. When I look at the overall image, I'm pretty good with it, thinking "cool stuff" ... then when I get to the face, I'm wanting something just a bit different, if that makes any sense.