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p.1 #1 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


Just trying new techniques...

Figured Id see if anyone likes the adjustments.

comments, ideas...etc.etc. are welcome.
















Edited on Oct 23, 2012 at 04:14 PM · View previous versions



Oct 20, 2012 at 04:43 AM
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p.1 #2 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


Love it!


Oct 20, 2012 at 05:01 AM
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p.1 #3 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


If your intent for the reflections was to provoke, "Say...WHAT?", you succeeded.


Oct 20, 2012 at 06:29 AM
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p.1 #4 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


Very interpretive renderings ... not much to critique, as it looks like you have "command & control" over what you are trying to achieve.

My pref might be to lower the gamma / blacks just a touch in the first one, and raise the gamma just a touch in the second one ... but that's only going to be personal pref, rather than a nit, given these are highly stylistic.

If you haven't already, I might revisit to give the most credence to the face at where you want PP. When I look at the overall image, I'm pretty good with it, thinking "cool stuff" ... then when I get to the face, I'm wanting something just a bit different, if that makes any sense.




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p.1 #5 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


No matter how attractive a lady may be I always look first at the face and mostly at the eyes, which are like a window into her soul or something like that. I agree with Kent.

The second is too washed out, I prefer the first. The mirror effect on the floor is neat.



Oct 20, 2012 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #6 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


I agree, I deleted the (bad face one) and added 2 new ones.... thanks for comments...


Oct 20, 2012 at 03:06 PM
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p.1 #7 · Portraiture.... Comments, & ideas, welcome


The middle one is quite nicely rendered ... interpretive, yet compelling eyes and modeled features.

Although, I kinda miss the creative reflection candy to entertain us in the bg / negative space. Maybe a "color shadow" (vs. a reflection) behind her to flex your creative skills.



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