i asked a good friend if she would model for me to allow me to get better at taking photos. She brought her good friend along also. Let me know what you think. C&C welcome.
I like the poses and use of the environment; not a huge fan of the green-tinted processing but that's a personal choice.
Watch the hand positions; if you show the back of the hand broadside (eg 4 and 7) they will look big and manly
I agree with Mark -- the photos are a bit overexposed (guessing this is post processing). Also, the yellow wash is a little much. Like the composition/poses. Keep it up!
Oftentimes, your models are not the best decision-makers on how to do your post-processing. You need to develop your own style, both with how you shoot and how you process your shots. If you let them make your decisions for you, you'll never develop a style/brand that is all you.
overexposed. hold alt and you will see the hot spots. lots of tutorial online. how does sooc look? pretty models. with their outfit some structure bg would compliment it.