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p.1 #1 · senior photo shoot, first time


i asked a good friend if she would model for me to allow me to get better at taking photos. She brought her good friend along also. Let me know what you think. C&C welcome.

Thanks for looking

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Oct 18, 2012 at 10:58 PM
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p.1 #2 · senior photo shoot, first time


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Oct 18, 2012 at 11:00 PM
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p.1 #3 · senior photo shoot, first time


Skin tones look a little to the yellow side.
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Oct 18, 2012 at 11:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · senior photo shoot, first time


ya I agree for some reason I have them options and they loved this kinda processing


Oct 18, 2012 at 11:14 PM
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p.1 #5 · senior photo shoot, first time


I like the poses and use of the environment; not a huge fan of the green-tinted processing but that's a personal choice.
Watch the hand positions; if you show the back of the hand broadside (eg 4 and 7) they will look big and manly



Oct 18, 2012 at 11:20 PM
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p.1 #6 · senior photo shoot, first time


that is a great point, thanks little tips like that will really help me.


Oct 18, 2012 at 11:22 PM
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p.1 #7 · senior photo shoot, first time


Look a little over exposed to me...
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Oct 18, 2012 at 11:59 PM
 



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p.1 #8 · senior photo shoot, first time


I agree with Mark -- the photos are a bit overexposed (guessing this is post processing). Also, the yellow wash is a little much. Like the composition/poses. Keep it up!


Oct 19, 2012 at 01:55 AM
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p.1 #9 · senior photo shoot, first time


Oftentimes, your models are not the best decision-makers on how to do your post-processing. You need to develop your own style, both with how you shoot and how you process your shots. If you let them make your decisions for you, you'll never develop a style/brand that is all you.


Oct 19, 2012 at 03:39 AM
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p.1 #10 · senior photo shoot, first time


What everyone else said. Except I really, really like number twol

Ed



Oct 19, 2012 at 03:54 AM
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p.1 #11 · senior photo shoot, first time


I think they're both very pretty, but the blonde is *slightly* prettier. Oh, the pictures themselves? JK

I would blow out the background more, like in #2. Maybe too much DOF (too low an F-stop) but otherwise nice. Man hands? Don't tell her that!!



Oct 19, 2012 at 03:59 AM
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p.1 #12 · senior photo shoot, first time


thanks for the great feedback I need to work on my PP, any tips would be great. I mainly use light room


Oct 19, 2012 at 04:00 AM
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p.1 #13 · senior photo shoot, first time


overexposed. hold alt and you will see the hot spots. lots of tutorial online. how does sooc look? pretty models. with their outfit some structure bg would compliment it.


Oct 29, 2012 at 06:23 PM
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p.1 #14 · senior photo shoot, first time


Yeah, the processing is too much for me. Just back it off a bit. Also, "girl in tree" just doesn't do it for me. Pretty girls.


Oct 29, 2012 at 11:24 PM





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