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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Hope - looking for critique


Looking for some helpful pointers






















Oct 17, 2012 at 02:07 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Hope - looking for critique


another one







Oct 17, 2012 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Hope - looking for critique


Hi,

My opinion, posing could be improved. The finger/nail biting "trick" doesn't work for me.
The flair of your speedlight/rimlight is not a bonus to me.
Best one is #5. ( I made a mistake and wrote #4 in my first post)

Thanks

Rgds
Velu

Edited on Oct 18, 2012 at 12:05 AM · View previous versions



Oct 17, 2012 at 02:50 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Hope - looking for critique


Read up on posing and cropping and watch some videos. Work with your model to really deliver a mood. I can feel her posing and thinking. Back up and zoom in all the way on your lens to compress the image. The lighting is looking good.


Oct 17, 2012 at 08:14 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Hope - looking for critique


She looks pissed off.

The first thing I saw(seriously) in the first shot was the chicken cutlet next to her left arm. It sticks out like a sore thumb. He sleeveless looks okay in the third picture, but not any others.

The fifth one is the best one. She is standing, so her belly isn't pushing out, and she looks fairly comfortable.



Oct 17, 2012 at 08:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Hope - looking for critique


Photos look very uncomfortable. Many of the poses are not flattering for the subject (#2 photo). Minus the red eyes in the last one, it's the best shot. It would be a keeper if she would smile or not look upset. I'm certainly no expert... where's steady?


Oct 18, 2012 at 09:05 PM





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