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| p.1 #10 · Captain Kline - Engine 15 |
Nice portrait, Matt. What I like is the composition and the expression on his face. The lighting gives us a good "mood" too.
I see a problem in the DOF. You used f1.8 @ 1/125 at 85mm. I see the OOF hand as an issue, but also parts of the face are drifting into OOF. The tab of his coat is nice and sharp, but it's the eyes you want sharp, and they are farther away from the camera. You can't get all that in at f1.8. And you may be front focused at bit.
I think you needed to stop down a bit more or re-arrange the composition to get the hand and eyes a similar distance from the lens.